Friday, December 01, 2006

In the last hour.......

of the last day of the last year of the 21st century a girl child sat on the edge of the wall overlooking the forsaken land. She tried to picture in her mind what it must have looked like a hundred years before when people roamed the cities on foot, in cars and trains and buses. She imagined that it had been beautiful, but now all that was left was a wasteland of tumbling broken steel, glass and concrete. She knew that soon there would be nothing left, not even the ruins. Plans were underway to finally clean up the forsaken land. She watched as the men dressed in bio-hazard suits set the charges that would implode the ruins and obliterate the past. They had chosen to forget the past. What was done was done they all said. But secretly she kept a hidden journal full of clippings and photographs and stories about what the world had been like before the "Change". If they knew she had these things they would put her away like they had the historians and scholars. So she kept it all hidden where no one would ever look. She jumped as the first explosion went off. Then as if it were a fireworks display they all went off in succession. And then it was done and the past was gone. Along the wall where a platform had been set up for the dignitaries a loud cheer went up. Tonight there would be many parties of celebration, ringing in the New Year.

10 comments:

Ian russell said...

so refreshing to read some good old fiction on scribbles. excellent short!

Anonymous said...

Bleak and compelling. I hope it will remain well written fiction.

Anonymous said...

Not a cheery vision of the future! But a lovely post! Ditto what Kerstin said!

angie said...

Very good. The idea reminds me of Ayn Rand, I think it was Anthem.

Anonymous said...

Loved what you did with this weeks prompt. It's dark but I love the picture you painted here.

Anonymous said...

I have an image in my mind of a black and white photo with the girl showing up in a bit of color. Thank goodness for historians, and may we never forget our history, because if we do, this will be our reality. In my opinion....

papyrus said...

Chilling, yet so well written. Thank God for that one little girl and anyone else who fights the tide.

Anonymous said...

Another provocative story. I want to know more. . . what change? what are they trying to obliterate. . . I love writing that teases the imagination- good going!

sundaycynce said...

I love didactic science fiction in this vein. I completely agree with Kerstin's comment; and I, too, was reminded of Ayn Rand's "Anthem," also in some ways of Orwell's "1984," and even more of a short story I have taught by Stephen Vincent Benet, called "By the Waters of Babylon." I also agree with Michelle that if we do not learn from the world's history, we may find this too frightfully near reality to be comfortable with.

Anonymous said...

I keep asking myself what will this all be replaced by. Certainly nothing so good as what was taken away.