Thursday, November 16, 2006
" I need a hero, I'm holding out for a hero......"
The song kept running over and over in her head. Everywhere she went there it was like a small pounding headache. On the bus over the talking and laughter and grinding of axles the song was faintly playing. Walking to work as the traffic zoomed by she could hear the chorus over and over again. She could not explain how it got stuck in her head, but it was. Had she heard the song recently on the radio, she was sure she had not. Had someone at the office been singing it? There was not a single person in her dingy gray office that could even possibly know the words so that was not an option. Why could she not get it out of her head. It was like a bad case of the hiccups. Nothing could stop it. Not listening to her favorite song, not going to a loud concert, nothing. It was stuck and she was sure it was going to last forever. It had been three weeks now. And now even when she dreamed it was there playing softly in the background. She was pretty certain she was going insane. That day for lunch she headed out by herself. Usually she brought something and ate it in the lunch room but today she felt like getting out. She stopped in the first diner she saw, opened the menu and had an epiphany. There was the answer to ending her misery and getting rid of the song. When the waitress asked for her order she politely said, " I'll have the hero."
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15 comments:
Short and sweet, excellent.
Great twist. Love it.
Nice! Love the twist at the end.
Cute. Again, brevity, good writing and a clever twist always work
Cute. Again, brevity, good writing and a clever twist always work
A great twist, as others have said. this made me smile
OH My Goddess,grrl. That same stupid song went through my head too.
This was neat, the way you built up the expectation and then let us have it. Thanks.
love the short sweet post, complete with just the right sharpness to the punch line.
Well done.
Fun little bit of prose! Couldn't help but think of Becca's post ... you may want to check it out, fits quite nicely with yours!! Holding out for a Hero
Well, I told you in person, but of course I think this is great!!
And thanks for the props over on my page too. :)
That's great. Of course, now I've got the song going on in the background. Thanks!
I Love these stories!!!! Keep going away at your little writing chateau within your cute apartment-only don't neglect my precious Chavdar in the process.!
How funny- I admire this kind of candy-writing. It's delicious and must be more labor intense and difficult to pull off then it would ever appear. THanks!
Haha Love your post. found you on scribblings..
go to lyrics.com!
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