Friday, December 08, 2006

The Reward

She received a reward every time she behaved. A cookie here a piece of pie there and sometimes a pair of diamond earrings or plasma screen TV for her room and once a pony. She learned to always behave. At her father's company Christmas Party she was on her best behavior everyone commented on how cute she was and what a good girl. But underneath all of the good behavior lurked a soul that wanted to yell and kick and scream at the top of her lungs. She kept her dark feelings all bottled up and slowly the rage built and built and as the years passed the rewards stopped. She no longer received a cookie here a pair of diamond earrings there. She dyed her hair purple then blue then green. Every part of her body that could be pierced was and she was on her ninth tattoo. Her parents told her every day how disappointed they were in her and she was not invited to her father's company Christmas party. So that night she sat on the balcony of her room that over looked the garden below where people from her father's company mingled. They laughed and drank and made small talk. She heard her father's voice before she saw him, " Lillian, oh yes it has been hard since she stopped behaving. We are not sure where we went wrong, but tomorrow we are having her sent to that school where Thomas sent his daughter. Yes, that's the one, when his daughter came back she was perfect never caused a problem, we hope we will have the same kind of success with Lillian. Yes, yes, their methods are violent but we think this is the only way...." She did not want to hear the rest. She had suspected they were planning something and now she had her answers. She would not let them do this, she had seen that girl when she had returned and she saw that her eyes were dead. She would not let that happen to herself. She went to her closet and started throwing things into her backpack. She lifted the edge of her mattress and removed the stack of cash she had secreted away for just such a time. She crept downstairs and out the front door. She looked back over her shoulder at the house glistening with Christmas lights, she could faintly her music and people laughing as she walked toward the street. One day she knew that her parents would get the punishment they deserved.

7 comments:

Amber said...

What a sad, but real post. It reminds me of my Aunt and her friends. They are very wealthy, had nannies, ect...And so many of them have "sent" their children to some "program" to be "fixed". It is CRAZY!
To think if they had just spent time, they wouldn't be spending all the money...

:)

Anonymous said...

Or that she, Lillian, would get the punishment. Nice post.

Anonymous said...

A very nice post. I like that the ending could be expanded on, too, if you decided to make this Chapter One, or possibly a short story.

Anonymous said...

She should have smuggled out some of the diamond earrings, too!

I enjoyed reading your tale of reward and punishment. If you decide to write the sequel, would it's title be, "Revenge of Punishment and Reward"?
:-)

JP (mom) said...

Excellent vignette for the prompt ... sad how reward can become its own punishment.
peace, JP

Anonymous said...

Hm, sensing a pattern here, Heather m'dear... ;)

Alex S said...

Your poor sweet parents are going to read this and wonder if somehow something they did inspired this story. uh-oh, looks like I better ring them up (again) on the pronto and explain that my psychological services ARE working but that sometimes the terrain of your mental landscape is so complicated that unexpected things occur. I had promised them that you would only be writing sweet, innocent tales about lost butterflies and raccoons and now this! Heter, please, I depend on your parents support every month! (But it was a very juicy story!)