Tuesday, June 16, 2009

The barn

There was a lantern on the barn as I approached from the west. My horse was tired and I needed a hot meal and a bath. The man and his woman were nice enough to provide both. I felt bad when I stole her cameo broach and his shot gun, but I had to survive. I left them tied up in a stall in the barn with some food and water. It may be a week before anyone rescues them, but they should be ok. I have grown weary of this life style but I go on. I dream of a small place of my own like the man and woman have. A small house and a head of cattle, I could graze in the mountains. A red barn, I would love to a have a freshly painted red barn with a lantern hanging from a hook. My husband would come in from milking our cow, kiss me and say that dinner smelled good. These dreams have plagued me for the last three years. I barley sleep any more for fear they will come in the night to destroy me. I can not give up now that I am so close to the end. The end will come when I kill him, the man who stole that dream of the house, barn and husband, the man who shot me and left me bleeding and for dead as I laid next to my dead husband in the rain that night three years ago. I am close to him for I can feel it in my bones. Once he is dead maybe I can sleep again.

The end: Tired and Sore

5 comments:

Marja said...

Ah revenge can be killing Great story

Missy said...

A revengeful woman and a western toboot. Love it.

quin browne said...

excellent idea..one continuity issue (i'm a script supervisor, this is what i do)...

i left them tied up

and

food and water within reach.

lissa said...

you expressed her anger and frustration very well, though I don't think she will be satisfy even when she gets revenage, the lost is too great

Tess said...

Terrific story ... and I think there should be sequels ... flash pieces that take us on her journey ... physically and spiritually.