Friday, November 21, 2008

Fire Down Below

The fire had burned for forty years now. Under the ground like an angry god. When it snowed it would melt within seconds of hitting the hot ground. She had lived in the town all of her life. She had married here, had her children here and buried them all here. When they came to move her she refused. The town was toxic they said, but she did not care. Every thing she loved was here in this fire drenched town. It took many years to move everyone out and when just a few were left they sent in the mean ones. The ones who would force the last ones out. When the man came to her door ready to force her to move she felt no remorse when she bashed in his head with her frying pan. She knew she was headed for hell, but no one was going to make her leave the only home she had ever known. She figured what the heck she had lived in this burning, godforsaken town, forgotten by the world for more then 40 years and she guessed that the real version of hell could not be much hotter, so she buried the man in her garden and waited to die, grateful for just a few more days at home.

10 comments:

Linda Jacobs said...

Woah! That's some story!

one more believer said...

a beautiful story told in simple sentences... home is everything...

Marja said...

Very powerful story. People often do get really attached to the place
were they have lived their live

paisley said...

sometimes,,, you just gotta do what you just gotta do huh??

BJ Roan said...

Short but powerful! Our home should be a safe place, in this case it wasn't very safe, but still it was her home.

Alisa said...

This is great! I love that she felt no remorse when she bashed in his head. It made me smile because I think we all wish deep down that we could be that way. Fearlessly defiant.

SweetTalkingGuy said...

Love the bit about bashing in the mean mans head with a frying pan!
How do you think these things up?

tumblewords said...

A wow story! Well done!

Patois said...

I'd be grateful for a few more days.

Mary said...

Wow! You really packed a punch into just a few words.

Well written!