Saturday, June 08, 2013

Rosemary

They had named her Rosemary for her great grandmother. She had wanted to be called Caitlin or Brittney or Ashley. Rosemary was old fashioned and she was definitely getting tired of the Simon and Garfunkel song. So the summer she turned seventeen she decided that she would be called Madison. Her parents refused but her friends at school went along and from then on she was called Madison. When she went to college no one ever knew her real name except for the registrar and when she applied for her first job Madison was the name on her resume. She even sometimes forgot that her real name was Rosemary because after all these years her parents had finally relented and also called her Madison. So on that day on the subway when the handsome man smiled and said " Hey don't I know you? Didn't we go to elementary school together? Is your name Rosemary?" she was slow in answering so her friend said, " Her name is Madison." The man looked crestfallen, " Oh that is too bad. You do look an awful lot like Rosemary. She was such a funny, beautiful girl. I had a huge crush on her when I was in the fifth grade, but then we moved away and I never saw her again, but I always hoped I would. Rosemary, what a spicy, lovely name. Sorry for the mistake." he said as he stepped off the train.

14 comments:

DJPare said...

Wait, Stop! It's me Rosemary!
Nice...

Lucy said...

ooh, ooh... Can I be Rosemary??
very spicey post! :)

TMTW said...

Beautiful.

gautami tripathy said...

Thats life!

Anonymous said...

My heart sank when I read the ending.

Anonymous said...

Oh! She has to run after him and tell him the truth so they can get married and live happily ever after and eat cupcakes forever and ever and ever!
-Alex

lissa said...

I like this story. You always such good ways of telling them.

JHS said...

I love this because it is such a unique approach (as always).

I relate to the name change part . . . my parents named me "Jane" . . . it's amazing what one little "i" can do for your outlook . . .

Rob Kistner said...

Hi X -

Sad tale... ;(

Proves it's always best to be authentic -- to be your self.

Betty Carlson said...

Great storytelling. And so much story in so few words!

awareness said...

so many Madisons.....so few Rosemary's......

great story......I love how much you were able to capture within a paragraph.

there was a local author in my hometown who wrote "postcard" short stories.....the whole story had to fit on the back of a postcard. It is so difficult to do......and you have done it.

great read....... have a wonderful week.......

Forgetfulone said...

Oh! Poor Rosemary. She had no idea what a gem she had in her name. Loved your story.

sundaycynce said...

Charming and tantalizing little story.

I also agree totally with what Awareness said.

Molly said...

I knew a Rosemary in middle school... Lovely