Saturday, May 19, 2007

Zombie War

The mask slipped down a little. She was sweating and her hair and face were slick with the sweat. She tightened the straps on her mask to make sure it slipped no more. If any of the rancid air got in she would be dead. She gripped the machine gun in her hand even tighter. Her team of hunters were tired. This was the 10th patrol in a row they had taken, but so many of the other patrol teams had lost too many members to take this, the most dangerous patrol of the night. She walked slowly behind her captain as she heard the large town clock strike midnight. Twelve gongs rang out through the night, signalling the beginning of feeding time for them. THEM, that is what they called them. THEM, those who had been their loved ones once. THEM, those who ate the flesh of humans, THEM, those who should have stayed buried in the ground but now walked among the living. She clearly remembered the night she was on patrol and finally encountered a former loved one. Her sister! She had done what was necessary but it still had hurt her heart when she had severed the head of the thing that had been her sister. Her family was all gone now and all she had left were the men on this team, they were now her family and she would do anything to make sure none of them were ever turned into one of THEM. She tightened her mask again and prepared for the fight that would surely come as THEY began to feed.

15 comments:

Anonymous said...

Very cool story. Spooky.

Rose

xo

Rob Kistner said...

Grizzly, but certainly engaging! Nice job.

Sunday Scribblings said...

I do love a little zombie vignette! Probably going to go see 28 Weeks Later soon. Yay, zombies!
-Laini

Amber said...

Your Sunday Scrib is always interesting and unexpected.



:)

gautami tripathy said...

Brainwashed into thinking who is family and who are THEM!

Zombie is the right word.

JHS said...

Creepy, but deliciously so. Would make a great movie . . . better than "Invasion of the Body Snatchers."

Inconsequential said...

Cool

a pleasant bit of darkness.

Patois42 said...

I do have to agree with Amber that your scribblings are always unexpected. And always a delight.

Anonymous said...

Note to self: if I ever need to arrange a funeral someday for an unfortunate friend or relative, be sure to go with cremation rather than burial. Yet more evidence that it just nips a whole bunch of potential problems right in the bud!

Crafty Green Poet said...

My partner will love this, he's really into zombies!

Anita Powell said...

Great story! I always say, anytime there's a zombie it's going to be interesting. ;)

Anonymous said...

Love it, Heather. :)

DJPare said...

I hate THEM! :)
Good story.

Anonymous said...

Why you gots to be killing off my peeps. Not cool. Not cool at all.

sundaycynce said...

Fiction seems to come to you so easily and it just gives me fits. I attempt it occasionally, but seldom end up posting it. I envy those who seem to do it well with such ease.