Friday, April 06, 2007
In the news.............
that morning was a story of woman who was found wandering around downtown wearing a wedding dress and carrying a bloody knife. When interviewed by police she claimed she had no knowledge of who she was or where she had gotten either the dress or the bloody knife. They admitted her to the psychiatric ward of the county hospital where she underwent a multitude of tests. All of the test and psychiatrists agreed that she was suffering from amnesia. The police tested the blood and could find no known DNA match. They plastered her face over all the news outlets in the city, state and entire country but no one, not a single person, came forward claiming knowledge of the woman. So after a few months of hospital care and still no return of her memory and still no person coming forward claiming to know her, she was released. The people of the city had been generous and when she left the hospital there was a very large sum of money waiting for her, donated by people who felt bad for the young woman with no memory. She rented an apartment and found a job and created a life from nothing. With no memory she could create what ever she wanted. For a while she was a minor celebrity in the city and people would approach her at restaurants and in the grocery store, wondering if her memory had returned. After a year people stopped approaching her and her celebrity wore off. Two years into her new life she meet a man and fell in love. He loved her humor and her brain and did not care that she had no memories from before two years. They married and in a few years started a family. And still no glimmer of memory. Her husband would sometimes ask and she would always say the same thing, " I don't think it is ever coming back." Doctors would occasionally call to interview her for a paper or a study about amnesia and it sometimes lasting effects. Then one day when her children were nearly grown and on their way out the door headed to school, she sat down with a coffee and began to read the paper and there in the news was the story she had feared she would see all these years. The story was about two hikers who found a body in a shallow grave in the forest preserve that bordered the city. The story went on to mention that the body appeared to be wearing a tux. The police were chasing leads. She set the paper down when she heard the doorbell ring. She slowly got up crossed to the sliding glass door and slipped out the back, leaving the police ringing the doorbell on her empty house.
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13 comments:
Skillfully written.
Yet so very sad.
But in the midst of it all...
With no memory she could create what ever she wanted.
This liner above felt almost like Paradise. :-)
Wow, what a story. It was a fascinating read. Is it based on fact? You built up the suspense very well. Well done!
This held my interest all the way through. Susan had it right. The gem is "with no memory she could create whatever she wanted." Many of us could use a case of amnesia and forget some things we have been taught.
Pulled me in and all the way down the page.
What a story. You created a good character. I want to know what happened next... and what happened before!
Great story, so does it mean she had kill someone?
Oh, that gave me shivers! Excellent!
Excellent read. I could see it all happening!
Mine is posted.
A kick-ass read. Very good.
Very fun ride.
You are one creepy.creepy Heterbones!!! Great Story!
Good fictional twist on prompt.
Wow - this was so good I was convinced it was real. It's the kind of story to tell round a campfire at camp or something - like an urban myth! Very well done - I myself have never been any good at short stories but this was fabulous!
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