Thursday, October 19, 2006

Being Good

It felt so good to be bad. She had lived most of her 29 years being good. Studying in school, not smoking, no excessive drinking, following instructions and directions, listening to her fellow man, working hard. But now she was free of all that for the first time in her life and it felt good, darkly, dirty, sexy good. She could see the fear in the eyes of the man she had the heel of her boot planted on. She dug her heel in a little more and watched with glee as he winced in pain. This was the most fun she had in a long while. She asked the man one more time for the information she wanted. This time with blood streaming from his broken nose he gave it up, everything she needed to know. She removed her foot from his neck holstered her gun and sauntered out. She headed for a bar she knew would be crowded with the kind of people she needed. In her short skirt and fishnet stockings a man couldn't help but watch her walk by. And that is exactly what she wanted. She had learned the fine art of distraction from a prostitute in Memphis. It was a skill she had never used before but had found she had a knack for and she used it now for one reason and one reason alone, Revenge! They would pay, all of them. The good girl was gone.

16 comments:

Alex S said...

Heter! Very intriguing story! I liked it. We can only imagine all the havoc that is about to be unleashed by this girl gone bad. I bet shes going to eat cupcakes now too and trap her chiwawa in her apartment and end all of that poor pup's dreams of making it big out in Portland. So glad to see you writing regularly! Your posts are so great and so fun!

Anonymous said...

What a fasinating take on this weeks prompt. What hidden depths you have!

Otter said...

I want to know what happens next...

Anonymous said...

Thanks for inspiring my Sunday Scribbling about being good.

Anonymous said...

What fun! People always assume I'm good. I usually don't want to disappoint them. But then I read a story lke this ... oh, temptation to at least fantasize!

Grace said...

Loved it! I would consider myself as a "good" girl, but I often long to go to the dangerous, mysterious side...not necessarily forever, just to try it out.

Alex S said...

Heter!!! You MUST copy and paste this link and go to it IMMEDIATELY!!!
http://www.chicagobites.com/2006/09/cupcake_crawlers_took_to_the_s_1.htm

che said...

wow . sadistically good huh !

Cyn Bagley said...

Oh oh, how fun. Very noir!

Catherine said...

Are you going to write the rest of the story? I think it would be very interesting..

xegbp said...

Thanks everyone for your great comments. I had not really thought of continuing the story but you all have inspired me to work more on it.

PS Alex, my friend Diane had discussed doing the cupcake crawl.

Anonymous said...

I second the idea of wanting to know the rest of the story - but then again, not knowing the rest of the story really compliments the story itself. Wonderful intrigue.

Jim Di Bartolo said...

Ouch!

:)
Jim

Anonymous said...

Very interesting take on being good! I agree, the not-knowing what happens next is very intriguing.

Anonymous said...

Ahh, the woman we see in the mirror

[a} said...

Sounds like the beginning to a thriller novel.